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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 23   Sat Jul 23, 2011 6:12 am

An animal attacks them? Or they attack an animal for foods or something. Or an animal eats the food they had brought.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 23   Sat Jul 23, 2011 6:39 am

The scent of Sprig plants would prevent most creatures from comming onto the road...


Perhaps I should just leave it the way it is.


Anyway, I'm going to re-write the part where they get to Vish to make the waterfall and corge-valley-thing as well as the town itself seem much more spectacular.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 23   Mon Jul 25, 2011 11:51 am

Ok
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 23   Sun Jul 31, 2011 9:29 am

I somehow mannaged to unblock my writer's block and finish chapter 23, write chapters 24 and 25 and start chapter 26 today. o_0
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 23   Sun Jul 31, 2011 1:23 pm

Good Job! use a Bunker buster on that Writers block...
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 23   Mon Aug 01, 2011 4:58 am

Seems I did. Smile
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