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PostSubject: Plot and Chapter Listing   Mon May 16, 2011 8:59 am

I just thought I'd post this. These are the contents of the notepads in my "Life in Algol" folder:



Characters:

Main protagonists:
-[Human] David Wells - an exobiologist trying to escape his past
-[Human] Kate Rogers - Donathan's explorative granddaughter who sees David as an older brother
-[Human] Kenji Hahn - David's partner
-[Xen'vi] Viera - a gracefull young female Xen'vi from the Svia'mat clan
-[Xen'vi] Priantos - agent of the Valiero's Order of the Arcane
-[Xen'vi] Yaldin - a young trader boy from Jay, hiding amoungst the Aari

Main antagonists:
-[Human] Steven Bridges - an over-patriotic human soldier who sees the Xen'vi as animals or perhaps slave material
-[Xen'vi] Bru'gash - tyrant emporer of the Iga clan
-[Jaylen] The Shadow - evil Jaylen spirit thing

Side characters:
-[Human] Proffesor Donathin Rogers - lead biologyst-person of the humans
-[Human] Stephanie Stallings - botany doctor person
-[Human] Marcus Taylor - leader-ish dude
-[Xen'vi] Zashah - unofficial queen of the Oijah clan
-[Xen'vi] Ca'sheek - Viera's suitor
-[Xen'vi] Xa'clut'tsu - leader of the Hunters
-[Xen'vi] Tiard Va’rish - partner of Priantos
-[Xen'vi] Jer’ij Maros Nevara - Leader of the Order of the Arcane
-[Xen'vi] Dal’ash Helion Neveh - King of Valiero
-[Jaylen] The Guardians (9) - Jaylen spirit-things who guide David and Priantos

Potential characters:
-[Human] Alexandra Matthews - leader of the Felland colony and ambassador to the Svia'vi clan
-[Human] Niel Donmeyer - corporate dude
-[Human] Anthony Frost - the mayor-ish leader of the human colonies on Novusvita
-[Xen'vi] Heireen - daughter of Bru'gash
-[Xen'vi] Geeh'vanhi - a teenage girl from a southern tribe and future love interest of Ca'sheek



Plot:

[Book I]

=David:
-Arrives on planet
-Does field research for Donathan
-Donathan dissapears at clearing; Involved in his search
-Finds Donathan; Meets Viera
-Back to Darwin, aircraft brought down by Hunters; saves and saved by Viera
-[Darwin] Finds evidence of electro-communication in wildlife
-Takes Viera on next field study; craft once more brought down
-Encounter with Hunters; tracker removed; saved by Viera
-Survives with Viera in jungle
-Battle with Hunters; saved by Kenji, who kills Hunter leader Xa'clut'tsu
-Taken back to Darwin; feels affections towards Viera
-Kenji tells of electro-magnetic traces of markers
-Kenji elected as new human ambassador
-Shift ends, back to Earth for two weeks, joined by Kenji, Kate and Donathan

=Viera:
-Gets job to find and protect a certain human; spies on Darwin
-Follows human expiditions
-Saves Donathan at clearing; looks after him at her village
-Gives Donathan back to humans; followes them into jungle; saves and saved by David
-Taken care of in Darwin
-Goes with David on his expidition
-Aircraft brought down; seperated from David
-Finds David and saves him from Hunters
-Survives in jungle with David
-Battle with Hunters; saved by Kenji, who kills Hunter leader Xa'clut'tsu
-Taken back to village; parts with David
-Tells villagers the story; revelation from oracle

=Priantos:
-Called to Pallace; overhears king speaking about war
-Next day, meeting at Order HQ; gets job
-Job with Tiard to find and arrest a dangerous activist leader through the streets and underground of Valdin
-Arrests activist, but he seems to have poisoned himself; gets few junbled words from him before he dies
-Same pattern with two more apparent activists, before one is cought alive
-Man interrigated, reveals conspiracy that has apparently infiltrated the ranks of the Royal Force
-Man escapes and dissapears
-Conspiracy investigated, found to apparently be lies
-Learns of Hunter activity in the north
-Travels to Jin
-Small battle with northern Hunter-branch
-Lead to the Ruines of Jin
-Finds first Jay'jil, Encounter with first Guardian

=Kenji & Kate:
-Comes into story as main characters when Viera and David goes missing
-Kenji explains situation to Svia; confrontation with Ca'sheek
-Kate insists to join search; Kenji "screws" the end of his shift and joins search aswell
-Finds and saves David and Viera
-Kenji tells David of electro-magnetic disturbances
-Kenji elected as new human ambassador
-Shifts back to Earth with Donathan and David

=Other:
-Iga begins to ammass at Ylalam and Nalim


[Book II]

=David:
-Shifts back to Novusvita with Kate; Donathan remains behind
-Chooses to continue investigation into electro-magnetic disturbances
-Plans are made for an expidition to easiest-to-reach disturbance: Baal
-Flies to Ruins of Baal, taking Kate along; finds Jay'jil, encounter with Guardian, alone by chance; chooses to keep information from team, but for Kate
-Visits New Greece Colony
-Follows Guardian's instructions to the Sacred Grove in Akavir
-[Akavir] Finds that a national festival is taking place in Svia in the capitol; Viera present
-Viera convinces Svia to allow Kate and David into the Sacred Grove
-Enters Grove; finds next Jay'jil
-Tells Viera of his journey so far; agrees to take her to Darwin
-Returns to Darwin with Viera and Kate
-Plans next expidition, to Jin
-Travels to Jin, without Viera or Kate
-Ambushed by Hunters, tracker destroyed in electric shock; saved by Priantos; seperated from expidition group
-Finds next Jay'jil with Priantos
-Rests at a Coltun camp
-Travels to the Lost Cathederal; followed by Hunters
-Enters Cathederal; finds next Jay'jil; Hunters killed by Guardian
-Reunited with human group; flies to next location - Red Mountain
-Stops at Aari capitol; escapes battle of Ar'alam
-The Battle of Red Mountain; the Final Conduit
-Escapes back to Darwin with Priantos
-Finds colony tense; sees live action feeds from Kenji in Valdin

=Priantos:
-Disciphers location of next conduit; travels via help from the Tita'vi to next location by sea
-Stops at Tel'nir; hears of battles with Iga (battles of Ylalam and Nalim)
-Continues on into the Sea of Ghosts; much danger; reaches the Pillars of Sevari
-Reaches the straights of Vvardenfell; heads on to the ruines of Jin
-Finds and saves David from Hunters
-Finds next Jay'jil with David
-Rests at a Coltun camp
-Travels to the Lost Cathederal; followed by Hunters
-Enters Cathederal; finds next Jay'jil; Hunters killed by Guardian
-Reunited with human group; flies to next location - Red Mountain
-Stops at Aari capitol; escapes battle of Ar'alam
-The Battle of Red Mountain; the Final Conduit
-Escapes back to Darwin with David
-Returns to Valdin
-The Battle of Valdin Begins

=Viera:
-Lives normaly in village; Ca'sheek chosen as her suitor, she doesn't argue
-Journeys by air to festival in Akavir
-Unexpectantly meets David there; is told of Jay'jil journey, helps him enter the Sacred Grove
-Finds next Jay'jil with David
-Goes to Darwin with David
-Sent back to her village
-Realises love for David; may not retract agreement to Ca'sheek; runs away from village
-Journeys to Red Mountain by air
-Attacked by Hunters, fights her way through them
-Reaches Red Mountain by foot; finds battle ground

=Yaldin:
-The battle of Ylalam; send away by parents to live with Aari
-Journeys with caravan to coast
-Gets on ship, taken to Nalim; meets Kenji and Kate
-The Battle of Nalim
-Battle won, motivated to win his family's land back
-Returns to the Jay'vi
-Stays at Ta'hil for a while; humans leave
-Moves on to Nalim, joining the retaking effort
-The Battle of Blood Canyon

=Kate:
-Shifts back to Novusvita with David; Donathan remains behind
-Chills at Darwin
-Chooses to join David on his next expidition
-Flies with David to Ruins of Baal; David finds the first Jay'jil
-Visits New Greece Colony
-Goes to Akavir; Finds that a national festival is taking place in Svia in the capitol; Viera present
-Viera convinces Svia to allow Kate and David into the Sacred Grove
-Enters Grove; finds next Jay'jil
-Tells Viera of his journey so far; agrees to take her to Darwin
-Returns to Darwin with Viera and David
-Joins Kenji on his journey of diplomacy to Aari
-Flies with Kenji to multiple Svia and Aari settlements; sees much
-Visits Ar'alam; meets Aari ruler
-Visits multiple more Aari and Svia settlements along the northern coast of Thera'nal
-Reaches Nalim; meets Yaldin
-Iga attacks Nalim; The Battle of Nalim
-Goes with Yaldin to Jay'vi; temporarily stays in Ta'hil
-Returns to Novusvita via route over Shel'nar Ocean
-Dropped off at colony; Kenji continues to visit Valiero
-David returns with Priantos; Priantos leaves
-Live action feeds are sent from Kenji in Valdin

=Kenji:
-Sees Kate and David off at spaceport
-Visits Stephanie and Donathan
-Stays on Earth for a while, in London
-Shifts back to Darwin; hears of David and Kate's journey
-Goes on diplomatic journey; takes Kate with by request
-Flies with Kate to multiple Svia and Aari settlements
-Visits Ar'alam; meets Aari ruler
-Visits multiple more Aari and Svia settlements along the northern coast of Thera'nal
-Reaches Nalim; meets Yaldin
-Iga attacks Nalim; The Battle of Nalim
-Goes with Yaldin to Jay'vi; temporarily stays in Ta'hil
-Returns to Novusvita via route over Shel'nar Ocean
-Drops Kate off at colony; continues to visit Valiero
-Reaches Valdin; council with king's advisors, finds out about aprouching Iga army
-Iga reaches Valdin; City in a state of panicked lockdown
-Sends live action feeds of Valdin to Darwin

=Other:
-The Battle of Sarwaer'Ju


[Book III]

=Pending



Battles:

[Book I]
-The Battle of Ylalam - Iga vs. Jay at border --> Iga wins

[Book II]
-The Battle of Nalim - Iga vs. Aari at sea --> Aari wins (Epic)
-The Battle of Sarwaer'Ju - Iga vs. Valiero at border --> Iga wins
-The Taking of Ar'alam - Iga vs. Aari at Aari capitol --> Iga wins
-The Battle of Red Mountain - Iga vs. Svia, Aari and Human forces in attempt to get to David and Priantos.
-The Battle of Blood Canyon - Jay vs. Iga at border --> Jay wins (Epic)

[Book III]
-The Taking of Valdin - Iga vs. Valiero at capitol --> Iga wins; Valiero king killed directly by Iga emporer. (Epic)
-The Battle of Darwin - Iga vs. Darwin --> Iga wins (Epic)
-The Retaking of Valdin - Humans/Valiero vs. Iga --> Iga looses
-The Battle of Eljo'k - Svia/Valiero/Aari/Human Allies vs. Iga at sea --> Allies win
-The Battle of the Caverns - Iga invation of the Great Caves --> Iga wins; Oijah flees to north
-The Battle of Bara'dur - Allies (now including Jay, Oijah and Iga rebels) vs. Iga at Bara'dur --> Allies win; Iga emporer killed. (Super Epic)



Chapter Listing:

-=The Demon Star=-


=David:
-Prologue: Dream
-Arrival: Arrives on planet
-A New Life Begins: Introduces to colony
-Day 1: First work day; plans for first expidition
-The Bat Caves: First expidition
-Tracker: Second expidition; the clearing scene
-The Search: The search; learns of Donathan's likely whereabouts
-Natives: Goes to Svia village; meets Viera; brought down in jungle
-Deep, Dark Jungle: The jungle scene with the diceratops
-Arrowheads: Resqued, back to Darwin; Learns of Hunters
-Midnight: Learns of Hunters some more
-The Need to Investigate: Speaks with Donathan; finds evidence that supports Donathan's theory
-Plans for Another Journey: Plans and asks permission for next field expidition; first disallowed, but then granted permission on certain conditions
-Dream
-The Next Expidition: Goes on next field expidition with Viera, Donathan, Kenji and Steven; performs expirement
-Into the Wild: About to leave, sees Xen'vi spying on them in underbush, sets chase; Enters jungle, followed by Viera; encounters Hunters, tracker removed, saved by Viera; flees deeper into jungle
-Lost: Goes back to expidition site; aircraft gone; makes camp near stream; tries to make fire, fails
-Survival: Third day in jungle; tells Viera his story
-Dream
-Unexpected Triumph: Survives
-Closer...: Survives some more; nears Darwin
-The Fight: Near Darwin; fight with Hunters; found and saved by Kenji
-Return to Darwin: Taken back to Darwin, feels something towards Viera; Kenji tells of expidition results
-Day before Departure: Kenji elected as new human ambassador; shift ends, back to Earth
-Epilogue: Epilougue; Earth


=Viera:
-The Bat Caves: Spies on humans
-Tracker: Follows humans; the clearing scene
-Natives: Meets humans
-Deep, Dark Jungle: The jungle scene with the diceratops
-Arrowheads: Questioned and looked after at Darwin
-Midnight: Tells David of Hunters
-The Need to Investigate: Questioned some more
-Plans for Another Journey: Asks to join David on next expidition
-The Next Expidition: Goes on next field expidition with David
-Into the Wild: Follows David into Jungle; saves from Hunters; flees deeper into jungle
-Lost: Goes back to expidition site; aircraft gone; makes camp near stream; tries to make fire, fails
-Survival: Third day in jungle; David tells his story
-Unexpected Triumph: Survives
-Closer...: Survives some more; nears Darwin
-The Fight: Near Darwin; fight with Hunters; found and saved by Kenji
-Return to Darwin: Taken back to Darwin
-Day before Departure: Sent back home
-Epilogue: Epilougue; Thinks of David; revelation from oracle


=Priantos:
-Midnight: Approuches palace
-The Order of the Arcane: Palace Bay scene
-The Need to Investigate: Spies on king
-The Assignment: Next day, gets assignment
-Ryan South: Performs assignment with Tiard
-Agents of Iga: Another arrest attempt
-The Arrest: Two more arrest attempt, one succeeds
-Conspiracy: Man interrigated; man escapes
-The Investigation: Investigates conspiracy; finds signs of northern Hunter activity that may support the conspiracy
-The Journey North: Travels north
-The Village: Enters Tita territory; small battle with hunters at Tita'vi village
-Unexpected Triumph: Finds information from Hunters; continues on to Jin
-The Fight: Lead by information to Jin; nears Jin; fights off remaining Hunter
-Jin: Reaches Jin; Enters ruins
-Epilogue: Finds first Jay'jil, encounter with first Guardian


=Compilation:
-Prologue
-1: Arrival
-2: A New life Begins
-3: Day 1
-4: The Bat Cave
-5: The Tracker
-6: The Search
-7: Natives
-8: Deep, Dark Jungle
-9: Arrowheads
-10: Midnight
-11: The Order of the Arcane
-12: The Need to Investigate
-13: The Assignment
-14: Plans for Another Journey
-15: Ryan South
-16: The Next Expidition
-17: Agents of Iga
-18: Lost
-19: Conspiracy
-20: Survival
-21: The Investigation
-22: The Journey North
-23: Ambush
-24: The Village
-25: Unexpected Triumph
-26: Closer...
-27: The Fight
-28: Return to Darwin
-29: Jin
-30: Day before Departure
-Epilogue
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PostSubject: Re: Plot and Chapter Listing   Mon May 16, 2011 10:32 am

I see, good job on these Smile I'm not being mean or anything, but do you really think someone is going to publish this? I'm just curious.
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PostSubject: Re: Plot and Chapter Listing   Mon May 16, 2011 11:00 am

Dunno. I've got the plot set out and everything, including some side-plots that I haven't yet included there. People seem to like being taken into worlds that don't actually exist, so that gives a bonus point, I think. I'd say it's looking pretty good, in my mind.

Whether or not anyone will publish my work remains to be seen...

Meh, even if it doesn't get published, I could always simply go copyright it anyway and "publish" it on the web.

Even if I don't do that, at least you guys will be able to read it. ^^


But yeah. I'm sure hoping it gets published. That would be, like, awesome. 8D Plus I might become famous. Rofl

So, I got you guys to help me out and make this as good as possible. Be assured, I'll thank you guys by name in the books if they get published. Smile


(Side thought: I wonder if I'll be able to split any money I get with you guys... Pondering )


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PostSubject: Re: Plot and Chapter Listing   Wed May 18, 2011 3:08 am

Well if you are going to publish them you may want to stay away from the big publishers, and try a smaller company as your sucess may be better. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Plot and Chapter Listing   Wed May 18, 2011 7:32 am

Yeah...

Also, this isn't the only topic in the Writer's Guild. Erm...
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