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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:46 am

And I already have two tweets.


Wow, this is off-ropic. My fault. Nervous
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 10:12 am

I have one tweet. Oh snap.


lol. Very off-topic.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 10:37 am

For some reason I suddenly have three followers. Wtf. Wtf!?


Anyway, slightly back on topic: My mom let me use the scanner, so the Xen'vi alphabets and the Second Age world map is on my PC. However, the quality of both is considerably crap because, for some reason, the scanner scanned in black and white...

As for the concept art, I discovered that they're still at the house of the friend who helped draw the chapter pics. However, some of the chapter pics can pass as concept art, so I'll upload them instead. Nervous
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 10:40 am

'Tis better than nothing. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 10:55 am

And... now my uploader is being a pain. -_-

Could I maybe email them to you, then you upload them somewhere (like Tinypic) and then PM their links to me like we did with that map?
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:11 am

Sure.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:19 am

Awesome, I'll send it allong within half an hour, hopefully. Smile


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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:28 am

Ok. I'll spam refresh my email inbox.


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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:32 am

Sadly I'll have to send it to you tomorrow as I have to go to bed now ( -_- ) and I don't have enough time to wait for GMail to upload the files. Frown

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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:35 am

Aw, okay.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Mon Nov 21, 2011 3:02 am

And now I can! Very Happy

I'll get to it...
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Mon Nov 21, 2011 7:48 am

Okay, but on topic (moved the topic to a more apt forum), I just hid a multitude of snags between chapters 10 to 12.

Chapter 10: I can't think of a scene in which to incorporate Nah'ir. At this time, she's supposed to be about half way along the coastal road back to Iga.

Chapter 11: No real problem here, except that it covers a time period of five days, which is pretty much very problematic, considering the end of chapter ten and the start of chapter 12 is only a night appart... Erm...

Chapter 12: This is where the above problem comes in. The best sollutions I could come up with is that Tiard and Priantos had to wait in Vish for between four to five days for a Seilen OR that Tiard and Priantos only arrived in Vish the morning of Chapter 12, in which case that key scene between Tiard and Priantos took place in some inn or something along the road.

Regarding chapters 11 and 12, whichever option we choose to go with (might even be a combination), I'll try to reduce the time of chapter eleven (and thus the time between chapters 10 and 12) to two or, at most, three days.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Mon Nov 21, 2011 3:18 pm

Hmmm...

Chapter 10: Maybe she could kill some animals and om nom them. Or something along those lines; it would be nice to have another scene of mostly wildlife doing stuff.

Chapter 11: Yeah, that kinda screws stuff up a bit...

Chapter 12: I'd have them stick around for a few days, maybe. I dunno. Then shorten chapter 11.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Mon Nov 21, 2011 11:08 pm

Chapter 10: Okay, I think I've come up with a nice scene. She stops at some shore-line town (think I'm gonna base it off Knysna somewhat near my home town) at some cliffy part of the shoreline and maybe just stops at a cliff-side café or something to reflect on stuff, wonder about Priantos, observe some people and wildlife and maybe meet with a Hunter (possibly one of those at Jin at the end of the book. She might fly via Seilen with this guy to Jin). I've also decided to keep Vish at the end of the chapter, but Priantos and Tiard will decide to stay there for a day or two (sort of like a mini fake honeymoon, if you get me).

Chapter 11: I'm not gonna shorten any of the actual writing in this chapter, but I'm deffinitely gonna shorten the time this chapter takes place during to about two days, maybe a bit less (like a day and a half, maybe). Other than that, this chapter is gonna stay fairly unchanged.

Chapter 12: Not gonna change much here anymore (other than reminding the reader that they stayed there for a day or two longer than planned), other than adding Nash'ir's bit. In this chapter, she'll sneek back into Iga'vi territory with the aforementioned Hunter (because the Iga/Valiero border is closed because of their hostility towards each other (one needs special permission to cross the border, and Nash'ir's supposed to be dead)) and probably reach a Seilen breeding station on the southern slopes of the Great Cyro Mountains.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Tue Nov 22, 2011 3:44 am

Sounds good.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Tue Nov 22, 2011 3:54 am

Thanks. ^^

I'm busy with chapter 10 as we speak. First I need to search the forum for where I, Lichen or Aletrius mentioned the name of the river seperating Iga and Valiero.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:51 am

Wooo....

Complex new chapters. 1, 2, 10, 11...
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sat Jan 14, 2012 12:04 am

In response to my last post, it's been done for weeks now. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:22 am

Lol.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Feb 05, 2012 6:51 am

A good idea regarding the groupings. Makes things more structured and ordered.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:16 pm

Indeed.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:05 am

Thanks! ^^
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