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PostSubject: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:23 am

Well, I've decided to make the chapters more orderly, with David and Priantos' story inter-changing between chapters. I've also added the point of view of Nash'ir to Priantos' part of the tale.

These are the new chapters, also showing how I've grouped the old chapters into the new structure:



New Chaper 1: Novusvita: (David/Viera Chapter)
-1: Algol
-2: A New Life Begins

New Chapter 2: The Order of the Arcane: (Priantos/Nash'ir Chapter)
-10: Midnight
-11: The Order of the Arcane
-12: The Need to Investigate
-13: The Assignment

New Chaper 3: Life in Darwin: (David/Viera Chapter)
-3: Day 1
-4: The Bat Cave

New Chapter 4: The Investigation: (Priantos/Nash'ir Chapter)
*Stuff
-15: Ryan South
*Stuff*

New Chapter 5: The Tracker: (David/Viera Chapter)
-5: Tracker
-6: The Search
-7: Natives
-8: Down in the Jungle

New Chapter 6: Agents of Iga: (Priantos/Nash'ir Chapter)
-17: Agents of Iga
-18: Interogation
-19: The Legend of the Jaylen

New Chapter 7: Arrowheads: (David/Viera Chapter)
-9: Arrowheads
-10: Midnight
-12: The Need to Investigate

New Chapter 8: Leaving Valdin: (Priantos/Nash'ir Chapter)
-21: Leaving Valdin
*Stuff*
-22: The Road
*Stuff*

New Chapter 9: The Next Expidition: (David/Viera Chapter)
-14: Plans for Another Journey
-16: The Next Expidition

New Chapter 10: Central Valiero: (Priantos/Nash'ir Chapter)
*Stuff*
-23: Vish

New Chapter 11: Survival: (David/Viera Chapter)
-17: Agents of Iga
-20: Survival
-22: The Road

New Chapter 12: Journey's Last Leg: (Priantos/Nash'ir Chapter)
-24: Nearing the Border
*Stuff*
-25: The Village

New Chapter 13: The Struggle: (David/Viera Chapter)
-26: Ordeal
-27: Heavy Rain
-28: The The Struggle

New Chapter 14: The Ruins of Jin: (Priantos/Nash'ir Chapter)
-26: Ordeal
-29: Jin

New Chapter 15: Day Before Departure: (David/Viera Chapter)
-30: Day before Departure
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:24 am

I like the new grouping of chapters. It's good to have Priantos introduced right at the start, too.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:45 am

That's the idea, yes. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:46 am

Mhm. Readers would be like, "Where'd this weird new main character come from" otherwise. Probably. I dunno.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:56 am

Either way, introducing Priantos earlier also highlights him importance better.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:13 am

Yes.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:19 am

Say, would you mind checking whether you can edit, for example, the first chapter now?
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:26 am

I cannot edit it.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:28 am

Hmm... Then I know what the problem is. Hold on for a sec.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:31 am

Try now.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:32 am

I can now. Yay.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:36 am

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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:44 am

Sheet, I just realized I have a ton of homework. And I'm 2/3 done the wiki articles too. D:
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:51 am

Oh noes!! D= (Why's the wiki article thing bad, though? It's more than half-way done! Very Happy Which is more than I can say for my editing of the book... Frown )

Anyhow, good luck with your homework.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:59 am

(Because it is tedious. And I'm lazy)

Fack the homework. I have wiki articles to do. lol *fails school*
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:01 am

Please forgive me for bursting out laughing at that last line. Lmao

Anyway, sorry for making you fail. Nervous
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:03 am

Meh, I failed history but I'm still on the honour roll. The homework can wait for tomorrow morning. I'll finish it right before class.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:04 am

Lol, that's what I normally do. xD


In other random news, I just started Tweeting... Wtf!?
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:19 am

Tweet tweet. I seldom tweet.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:30 am

You're on Twitter?
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:30 am

Mhm. I don't use it much though.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:32 am

Ah, I see.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:34 am

I don't even have an avatar, I better get one. How much do you use twitter?
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:39 am

Just started half an hour ago xD.
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PostSubject: Re: The New Chapter Structure   Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:40 am

Ha ha, lol.
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